Eclipse-Whisperwinds

[monkeymeme0693]

Name: Eclipse
Age: 3 years
Gender: Male
Pack: none
Rank: loner
Appearance:

Personality:

He is myserious and stays in the bushes.He can have a kind heart and a mean one if anyone messes with him or Ashook. He loves to lay in the darkness of the trees.

History:

His parents were caught by hunters and were sold to another contry.So he then had to survive on his own and a Lone wolf found him and taught him ow to hunt and the wolf took care of him.Then he left the wolf to live on his own.He found a litle wolf pup named Ashook and taught him and took care of him.Now the wolf pup thinks Eclipse is his brother but he dosen't mind.

Power: he can control fire and fly
Brief power description:

He can catch things on fire by just looking at the thing

Crush: no crush
Mate: none
RP example:

Eclipse quietly crouched in the under brush. A mouse sat munching on seeds from wild flower.A bird churped in the distance.The wolf in the under stalked the mouse. Then he came out of the under brush and with a it of his paw the mouse was dead.He flung it up in the air and ate it in one gulp."Maybe I should catch something for Ashook."He thought so he stalked up behind a rabbit he saw run off.He crouched and all of a sudden..."GRRRR!"Ashook fell from the tree and landed on Eclipses head.The rabbit looked up and ran away."There goes your dinner."Eclipse growled at Ashook"Sorry ."Ashook said putting his ears down and his tail in between his legs.

Other wolfs: none
Other:

Im just going to change him to a loner.

[Eldarwen]

Rules state that wolves must have at least one post together in order to become mates.

[monkeymeme0693]

What do you mean by that?

[Eldarwen]

It means that before Eclipse and Mai can become mates, you and mylovie would have needed to have had a roleplay together developing the relationship.

I see you've changed that now, but I decided to explain anyway for future reference.
I think you'll need to change a few things. Go back and read the form rules (written at the side of where you type all this info in). Personality must be at least three sentences, 8 sentences for an adults history and sentences for your roleplay example.

You'll have to take up the wings with Scratch by the way, I'm not quite sure if you have to buy the wings or whether you can make a character with them straight off...

[Scratch]

He can have wings straight of ^^ The wings are in store just because, if someone that made a normal wolf would like them =) And yes, your personality, history an RP example are too short. Correct that and he's accepted ^.~

[Eldarwen]

History for an adult needs to be eight sentences, you've used the pup minimal length for Eclipse. I think you're alright apart from that though...